Below are the critiques of this article and that it was not put into own words. I need the paper to be REVISED and EDITED using OWN WORDS not copy and pasting of anything or using direct quotes. The

Below are the critiques of this article and that it was not put into own words. I need the paper to be REVISED and EDITED using OWN WORDS not copy and pasting of anything or using direct quotes. The articles are referenced at the end of the paper those are the ONLY articles to be used. Attached is the paper to be revised and edited and the instructions of the paper as reference
READ READ READ-I am unable to accept your paper in it’s current form. It is currently a 55% near exact match to the original sources, meaning that the studies have not been put into your own words, rather have been copied verbatim from the original source. I see that you changed a word or 2 within these sentences, however that it still problematic. These studies should be paraphrased and synthesized into your own words. Using the same language from someone else is considered plagiarism when you don’t use a direct quote. Note that direct quotes would not be an acceptable revision as this should be put into your own words to demonstrate your understanding, and direct quotes should not be used.

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